ページ

2010年10月6日水曜日

Essay2-01a: My sweet home

My favorite place is my house. The reason I think so is feeling relaxed and comfortable. There are 3 places which I like better of my house. It is living room, garden and my room. Now, I tell you about them.

First, it is the living room because all of my family gather in living room. I love them very much, so I like watching TV, talking and eating meals with them. The living room is a place where these things can do.What's more, as it passed 20 years since we began to live in present house, my house is a little old. Therefore, the living room is always cleaned. I am clean, so I like clean living room. There is also the biggest television of all television. It is a liquid crystal television, so the image is very clear. As I like to watch TV, I am watching TV in living room for a long time. Anyway, living room is place where I can feel relaxed.

Second, it is the garden, because the view of my garden is good. There is a river in front of my garden. There is still a lot of greenery, too. Many creatures are in the river. For example, ducks, carps and turtle. Many birds also come to the river. When I was a little, I used to play in the garden and the river with my older brother. We found a lot of insects. It was very interesting like a adventure. Also, we have own tree individually. In this connection, my tree is camellia. It fruits beautiful flowers. My father's tree is little pine tree. My mother's tree is persimmon tree. My older brother's tree is loquat tree. My older sister's tree is gold osmanthus tree. I think that it is good to have own tree individually, so When I have my family someday I want to do same thing.

Third, it is my room, because there are many things which I treasure. For example, comics, personal computer and my favorite singer's goods. I usually read comics, use my personal computer and listen to my favorite singer's songs. I'm mended when I spend time doing these. I can feel the most relaxed and the most comfortable.

For such reasons, I chose my house as my favorite place. I really love my house very much. After you read my essay, if you think that you want to come to my house I do want you to come. I am waiting at my house. Thank you for reading it and please comments!

[428 words]

4 件のコメント:

  1. I love my house too! The place made me relax.

    I was very surprised that there is a river in front of your garden. When the typhoon come, is the river rave? If be that, is your house OK?

    返信削除
  2. Your favorite place look so good!!
    When did you planted tree on your garden? I like my room too.
    One paragraph needs five sentences at least.
    You had better put on your essay.

    返信削除
  3. Hi!
    My favorite place is my house too. So, I understand your feeling.
    Own room is comfortable, isn't it? I like my room too.

    返信削除
  4. You have so good favorite place!
    Your home's garden is great! I'm envious.

    返信削除